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I was bored xP

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:icondestinys-spirits:
Your seriously amazing at drawing animals *____* TEACH ME RIO!

Since you wanted crit... well it's actually hard to crit this. Your too good >_< So I'm going to get -really- nitty gritty.
When doing the pencil line art stages perhaps do it even lighter so that it's easier to rub out when going over it in pen. I say this because I can see some pencil lines not rubbed out and the leg overlaps the tail slightly. The staff the wolf is carrying doesn't seem to be straight either so use a ruler next time? Also for the first layer of the wings try to keep whether you want it curved or spiked consistent [I like it spiked personally]

I told you I'd get -really- nitty gritty. That's just because I didn't really have much to say soooo I picked out some stuff that were just ridiculous xD! Seriously you have talent *____* You have a fantastic sense of anatomy, I'm jealous xD

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:iconriokeshen:
Thank you!~ XD
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yay CRIT
w00t.
thanks I'm happy some one gave slight crit x3 now I know what to improve on 0:
I can do the pencil light * I hope*
I have issues with pencils >>
I break them a lot >3<
I have a ruler I can use
it's shaped like a triangle o.0
lawl
as for the wings I can do which ever lol Spiked ftw >> <<
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again thank you! XD

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:icondestinys-spirits:
Haha your welcome!

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aka. CrystalNeko
~Arina Tanemura fangirl~
Garnet of ~FinalFantasyIX-UK
Asakura Hao of *funbari-spirits
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This does indeed look good, I have trouble finding much error here really.
Maybe you could try and work on the fur more to give it an even fluffier feeling and spread those wings a little so it looks like he's in the air?
Right now it looks like your character stands somewhere ready to take off...

However this is well drawn :D

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Jul 4, 2009, 3:21:23 PM

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